Dust It Off Bloghop – Pitch

Welcome to the Dust It Off Bloghop!

This hop is hosted by Theresa Paolo and Cortney Pearson during three days: May 3rd, 5th and 7th!

I think there’s still time to sign up!

Today, the first day, May 3rd: Post a 1-2 sentence pitch about the shelved WIP.

 

I chose SANDS OF HOPE for this hop. It was the very first novel I wrote when I decided to get serious about writing, and I learnt a lot while and after writing it. Oh, it’s New Adult, of course.

The pitch can be found at my Projects page, but here it is:

Shannon goes back in time to Ancient Egypt where she finds out her presence is expected—kind of. There, she will have to face the power of a curse, the bitterness of a pharaoh, the obsession of his son, and the rage of a Medjai Warrior. 

REVISED (with the suggestions from comments): Twenty years old Shannon Wright goes back in time to Ancient Egypt where her presence is expected—kind of. There, she will have to face the power of a curse, the bitterness of a pharaoh, the obsession of his son, and the rage of a Medjai Warrior.

Better?

And because I love pics and drawings …

 This is how I imagine Shannon to be. Image by Suzanne Van Pelt.

And this is how I imagine Sethi, the Medjai Warrior. His name is Mert Öcal, a Turkish model (btw, he is 6’4″ of pure deliciousness).

 

What do you think? Any suggestions to improve my pitch?

What about yours?

Cheers,

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